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請幫忙改英作03
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SJB
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發問時間
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2018-09-05 12:59
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回答次數
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5
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英文May老師
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回答時間
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2018-09-06 09:27
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回答次數
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182
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親愛的學員您好，回覆如下：
1. If I have a cherishable challenging chance ... ---------沒有cherishable這個字；再來，cherishable challenging chance？語意相當奇怪。這裡請改成If I have an opportunity to ...。
2. The reasons can be explained as the following: ... --------- be explained as the following不符合英文表達法，請用The reasons are as follows ...。
3. Studying hard ... get a satisfied job. ---------這整句非常怪，請改成Studying hard and getting a prestigious diploma will not guarantee us a good job.。
4. And even we have ... correspond to our jobs ... ------前方已有動詞have，correspond在這裡需改成that corresponds或corresponding。
評語：通篇有太多不順的中式英文及文法錯誤，同學需加強英文基礎觀念，並多多閱讀英文文章來增強語感。
評分：6
以上回覆希望有幫助到您～
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